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the growth rates of China and India

The chart compares the number of people fluctutes indian and chinese since the year 2000 and predictes growth rates in the future.
Overall, it is clear that the figures of India people increased sharply from 2010 to 2025 while that the number of China people was went down suddenly the same time.

It can be seen that in 2000, the number of population figures for India at 1000 billions whereas Chinese higher than India approximately 250 billions of total table population. In 2010, Indian trends grew up dramatically until 2050 it will reach peak at 1,600 billions and catches with China at 2030.

It is clear that Chinese has decreased sharply the same period. As can be seen from 2010 to 2025 china rise slightly up 1,350 billions to 1,400 however after that was decreased gradually.

In conclusion, the growth rates of China and India were fluctuated suddenly. There has observed, there was sharp growth in the number of Indian people from 2010 to the future. In contrast, the number of china people was dropped significantly.

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