IELTS Task1: the number of visitors and result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were

The table and pie chart give information about visitors to Ashdown Museum.

It is clear that the total amount of visitors increase after the refurbishment, and also the percentages of visitor feeling satisfied about it rise considerately.

Before Ashdown museum was refurbished, people who feel dissatisfied made up the greatest proportion in the results of survey of visitor satisfaction, at 40%. While the figure for the same category dropped dramatically to 15% after the refurbishment. We can also see that the percentages of satisfied and very satisfied visitors combine together grew to 75%, which is much higher than the origin, only 45%.

Turning to another levels of visitor satisfaction, the percentage of very satisfied people decreased slightly from 10% to 5%, and the figure for no response group remained so at 5%. As for the total number of visitors, there was a marked rise of it, arriving at 92000 people during the year.

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