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IELTS TASK 1 : Observation of automobiles number owned by British people from 1971 to 2007


hasdymath 11 / 25  
Nov 25, 2015   #1
A breakdown of the number of car per household in great Britain from 1971 to 2007, a 36-year period is presented in the line chart.

Overall, it can be seen that car ownership in Britain increased between over the year. In any case, although the proportion of households with two cars mounted slightly, the number of citizens without a car decreased.

More specifically, nearly half of a large majority of British households did not have regular use of a car. About 7% of households had two cars, yet solely around 44% belong to one car. At 2%, households with three or more cars, because this was uncommon for the number of families to own the numbers.

Next, households with one car was the most common type from the late 1970's onwards, while this figure witnessed little change. The considerably change was seen in the percentage of households belong to one car, while this level decreased gradually over the period to approximately a quarter percent in the last year. Astonishingly, the two-car households experienced a steady growth, reaching about 26% in 2007, and the proportion of households with more than two cars rose by around 5%.




vangiespen - / 4,140 1449  
Nov 26, 2015   #2
Hasdi, you kind of forgot to create the 3 sentence minimum summary for this report. Not to worry though, I think it was just a formatting oversight on your part that caused the format problem. Let me show you what I mean while I address the other problems in your essay as well.

A breakdown of the number of caSr per household in Great Britain (THIS IS A PROPER NOUN. THE COUNTRY IS KNOWN AS GREAT BRITAIN SO THE PROPER NOUN CAPITALIZATION RULES APPLY) from 1971 to 2007, WHICH IS A a 36-year period, is presented in the line chart.Overall, it can be seen that car ownership in Britain increased between over the yearS. In any case, a Although the proportion of households with two cars mounted INCREASED slightly, the number of citizens without a car decreased.

- Combining the first sentence and the next paragraph automatically fixed the formatting problem for this paragraph.


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