The old and present look of Dubai

Write a paragraph about the differences between the city in the past and now

what do you think when you look at these pictures? Can you believe these pictures depend on one city? Now you see the Dubai, Then & now and we`re gonna compare its old look and now.

This picture that you see is a picture of Dubai in the past. But today, Dubai has undergone significant changes so that its history may not be believed.

as you can see, this city is more modern and attractive nowadays. it doesn't look like a place that was remote in the past anymore. Today, it has become one of the most advanced and touristic places in the world.

it has a lot of malls that are unique and they force you to be a big spender and change yourself to a shopaholic person. it doesn`t cut corners for its change anymore and you can guess it from its look.

for its final look, you can imagine a city that is stylish and modern and you can feel fresh there.

I did not learn anything about the past and present look of Dubai from this paragraph. There was no description involved at all. There should have been at least one focal point for the comparison. Say, the shopping district, how much has that changed over time? What did it look like before? What was special about it then? What does it look like now? What highlights the new image? Which of the two Dubai images did you prefer? Why? Explain the difference from a personal point of view, even if it is based on pictures you were provided. You need to show that you know how to write comparison paragraphs in this exercise. You did not effectively do that.