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'paying for communal expenses is quick' - internet has given people access to information on a level


lilly1234 1 / -  
Jan 2, 2011   #1
Development in the science and technology make improvement and influence in every field of our daily life. We can see these influences in the work places, at home and in everywhere. Today people use internet widely. The advantages of the widespread use of the internet are easy making daily life of people. They can pay their communal expenses through internet, to have connections with their relatives or family via mail or chat communications.

One of the positive influences of the internet is pay communal expenses via internet. Before it took a lot of time to go out and pay for communal expenses. People who live in countryside make a long way to come to the centre of town and to pay expenses. It was additional trouble to the people in winter. But today they can do all such kind of issue through internet.

Another benefit of the access to the internet is that every person can every time easily get aware about of all information and news in the world. It does not depend on where you are. You need only access to internet to get information about what you want.

Internet gives good opportunity to people to have connections with their relatives and friends. Messenger programs, chat programs can be good tool in that. When I go abroad, I always use internet to reach to my parents. I can call or do video calls to my family.

In conclusion, taking into account above mentioned, I can say that increase in the availability of information and the widespread of internet influence life in today's world. With help of internet people can deal some of their problems easily.

EF_Kevin 8 / 13,335 129  
Jan 4, 2011   #2
Development in the science and technology make improvements that influence every field of our daily life.

We can see these influences in the work places, at home, and everywhere else.

Today people use internet the Internet widely.

The advantages of the widespread use of the internet are easy making people's daily life easier.

But today they can manage all such issues through the use of the internet.

Another benefit of the access to the internet Internet is that every person can every time easily aware become aware of all information and news in the world.

With help of internet people can deal with some of their problems easily.

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Nanoluvv8D 2 / 6  
Jan 4, 2011   #3
People who live in countryside the countryside

The Internet gives good opportunity to people to have connections people better opportunities to connect with their relatives and friends.

You have a pretty good essay here, just make sure to read it and correct grammatical errors. Sometimes it helps to read your work aloud so that you can hear the mistakes


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