Hi Russell.
Let me help you to finalize your essay. In this moment, I only focus on your contents in the essay. Please, check it out.
, and the other people still think that healthy lifestyle is not that easy to be implemented
You should not harness "and" because you wanna describe something contradictive.
..............even now it has done by some people. BY CONTRAST, THERE IS AN OPINION THAT healthy lifestyle is not that easy to be implemented......
Turning to your thesis statement, you should mention reasons why people encourage the first and second opinion briefly. It can give general description what you review in the body paragraph. That can be represented by one or two words.keeping fit by taking an exercise
everyday EVERY DAY
are IS AN easy thing
sIn the first body paragraph, you offer the opinion, but there were not supporting sentences strengthening yours. Apart from that, you explain effects of the healthy life
" they get, such as prevent obesity, food addictive, and food poisoning" although it is not essential information and did not encourage your mind.
Hopefully, those can improve your essay..
GOOD LUCK