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Some people believe that online learning will replace traditional classroom in near future.



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Oct 20, 2025   #1
Some people believe that online learning will replace traditional classroom in near future. To what extent do you agree.

With advances in modern technology and technology dominating many of our jobs, there is a threat that online teaching will replace conventional classroom teachings. Although technology has brought massive changes, but it won't be able to provide the classroom learning experience.

Traditional classroom provides better quality of education. Firstly, it enables students to have one-to-one interaction with their teacher, allowing them to ask questions and get an instant feedback about their work from their teachers. For instance, if a student is stuck on a math problem, they could directly ask it from their teacher. Secondly, in-class teaching allows teachers to evaluate weaker areas of students and work on it. Most importantly, students study in an environment which encourages learning and fosters their focus. Thus, face-to-face learning allows better communication between students and teachers, thereby improving education.

The in-class way of teaching provides students with better interpersonal skills. Students can interact with other students, allowing them to improve their communication skills. In addition, the classroom improves student confidence. For example, in-classroom students often ask to present their ideas in front of the whole class or present a speech which makes them confident. Hence, traditional classrooms provide better opportunities for students to groom themselves.

To conclude, although online learning provides ease and makes learning accessible, it can never replace the traditional schooling system due to its limitations.

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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15921  
Oct 22, 2025   #2
With advances in ...replace conventional classroom teachings.

This entry will not be considered a prompt restatement. Rather it will be read as the opinion of the writer, which means this is a thesis statement rather than a paraphrase of the original topic. This is unacceptable and will not be scored as a part of the Task Accuracy score. The writer's opinion is difficult to find since it should only be reflected as an agree or disagree statement, with a summarized line of reasoning along with it. As such, the examiner could view this as a non compliant introduction paragraph and give it a non passing score. Then on compliant summary conclusion will also contribute to the non passing score of this essay.

Now, the reasoning paragraphs align with a single opinion representation so you will get points for a clear and connected discussion. It is cohesive and coherent. The problem is really at the start and end of the presentation.

I cannot tell you with specificity what your final score may be for this essay. Will you reach your target score? Maybe not due to the problems I indicated above. These are not hard to overcome problems. It will be easy for you overcome this if you remember to restate the prompt based on the given discussion points and do the reverse paraphrase at the end within 2 sentences of at least 40 words.


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