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technology will completely replace the traditional teacher in classroom. Do you agree

these days technology has important role in our lives ,and using the technology has became popular in different aspects. One of these aspects is classroom. In the classroom, different methods that is resulted from technology can be used to simplify the teacher duties and lead to students have better learning. With these explanations, personally I agree with this

Hei there! :D

I am not sure what your assignment sounded like, so I won't jump to conclusions. However, if you had to write an essay, you must by all means elaborate the ideas you have mentioned. Right now you only have the core.

T hese days technology has an important role in our lives and using the technology(/it) has became popular in different aspectsfields of interest . One of these aspects is classroom.(/One of the places technology has been implemented over the last few decades is in schools and colleges.) In the classroom, different methods that is resulted fromare based on technology can be used to simplify the teacher's duties and lead to students have better learning(/improve the quality of education). With these explanationsFor all these reasons , personally I must agree with this(specify what this is!).
What exactly have you written all this for buddy? As I can see it in the speech writing section- I will consider it for that only.

-Mention the technologies which have impacted the education inschools in the best possible ways--- for eg. computers, projectors, video conferencing classes,internet and by the way- personally- even a cellfone has impacted my education in the college ( just search anything on it in case u dont know)

- If u have to write a speech , maybe you can elaborate on these points.

Good luck
Dear mahsa,
I wanted to write an introduction paragraph for my new writing and since i am not good at writing i decided to write my paragraph here until other people comment on my writing. If you want to help me please help me to write the rest of writing ( i mean body of writing) and i will be happy you remark on my writing because you are iranian and you understand my problems in writing.

thank you in advance
Dear Mehdi,
I'll write your essay as soon as possible, but let me know why do you want to learn writing, and which exam are you preparing for. If you are preparing for TOEFL or GRE, I can help you more

Best Wishes
These days technology plays an important role in our lives ,and using it has became popular in different fields of interest. One of the places that technology has been implemented over the last few decades is in schools and colleges. In the classroom, different methods that are based on technology can be used to simplify the teacher's duties and improve the quality of education. For all these reasons, personally as I will mention later I agree with this .

The first reason to be discussed is the education facilities that is followed by technology. With entrance of technology in the education system, students and teachers will have less work to do. For example, pupils do not have to write their homework in notebooks and they will be able to use computers. Also in this case attending the classroom is not necessary and education can be done virtually. Whereas in the traditional method more time is spent in education and doing homework.

this is part of my writing, please comment on it
wow what a great improvement you've made in your essay! i think adding some concrete examples would make your essay even greater such as the compulsory use of laptops in certain universities, shift in type of tasks from writing speeches to making powerpoint presentations.
btw, i made an essay with the same theme as yours! hopefully it can give you more ideas.

Looking around, one would notice how technology has touched almost every aspect of one's life. From the lights in the ceiling, right down to the food that we eat. Indeed technology has become integrated with people's life that it has become impossible to separate them. Recent advancement in technology which includes educational aspects has introduced new means of teaching in classroom. The advent of technology in classrooms has made it easier, convenient, and interesting to study. Nevertheless, a concern raised by some experts is : technology will completely replace the traditional teacher in classroom. I am of the opinion that this change is unlikely to happen in the foreseeable future because teachers still hold an imperative role in educating students.

First and foremost, technology is being used and exploited by teachers in the classroom to make learning more interactive, interesting, and thus enjoyable for students. By changing their method of teaching, teachers try different methods to allow students to have a sustainable engagement with the subject at hand rather than brief knowledge about it. Powerpoint presentations, animations, and videos are instances of the tools used to do so. Although technology indeed slowly replace the traditional method of using textbooks as study references, at the end of the day, it depends on the methods adopted by the teacher.

Furthermore, unlike computers, teachers are human beings with feelings thus they can relate themselves to the students better. They do not only take the role as an educator, but also pillar of strength and moral supporter of the students. In times of dejection and low spirit, students can always approach their teachers to seek advice, counseling, and guidance from them. as it has been said ,'a teacher's influence is inifinite. There is no knowing where his influence will stop'. Indeed, what we have learnt from our teacher at school will be our weapon against the challenges of the competitive world.

As it has been said, 'the best teachers teach from the heart, not from the book', what we learn from a teacher in our classroom is not merely lines regurgitated from the textbooks or websites, but its much more than that. Teachers inculcated life skills, moral values, and knowledge for us to carry. Education is not simply about knowing, but applying what we know in our lives, and teachers assist us in doing so.

in a nutshell, no matter how advanced technology becomes in the future, teachers will not be sidestepped. as nelson mandela once said,'teacher is the man that changes the world', what we are today and will be in the future are shaped, molded, and crafted by the efforts of our teacher.
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