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Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read

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Mar 27, 2020   #1

teaching methodologies

Task: Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Recently, teaching methodologies is a contentious topic. Some people opine that online reading material should be only applied in teaching children to real whilst others argue that children are only allowed to use printed material. Both views have their own share of justifications, however, in my opinion, the latter is more reasonable.

On the one hand, it is understandable why people believe in the applicability of e-books in teaching their kids. Firstly, e-books play a role in minimizing space and weight for users. Obviously, when they own a smartphone, it is possible for them to bring thousands of e-books to everywhere with ease without a big luggage. Secondly, online materials provide a remarkable convenience in accessing expeditiously to appropriate knowledge. For example, it is possible for kids to read immediately documents in terms of medical when they suffer injuries due to the search capabilities of online technology.

On the other hand, others feel strongly that children should only use printed materials. Firstly, print books are friendly to the reader's health, especially kids. The fact is that these books seem to be safe for the vulnerable eyes of young children. To exemplify, electronic books usually cause screen fatigue which may lead to dryness and irritation for eyes while children do not have to worry about any of that when using print ones. Secondly, printed materials encourage children to concentrate highly on reading. To illustrate, the design of them creates favorable conditions for the child to highlight things, attach sticky notes and write down more information. These actions encourage children to grasp and comprehend fully the text.

In conclusion, from my perspective, I would like to conclude that young children should only use printed materials because of practical benefits for eye health and concentration.
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Mar 27, 2020   #2
This is a 5 paragraph essay based on the discussion outline requirement which was provided in the original essay. Always look for the discussion outline instruction at the end of the original prompt. That is what will tell you how many paragraphs to write in the essay. Based on the instruction, which is: Discuss both views and give your opinion., you were to discuss this in a 5 paragraph format:

- Topic paraphrase
- Online reading materials should be used to teach children to read
- Printed material should be used
- Personal opinion
- Concluding summary

Your topic paraphrase must never include your personal opinion yet. You have to simply outline what the discussion paragraphs will be about in that part of the paraphrase. So, it should be presented as:

Some people prefer to use electronic books and reference materials are more commonly used to assist in kids reading lessons. Others are simply old school, and believe that only paper and ink based texts should be used for such matters. It is important to assess the benefits of each teaching style in relation to the way children learn to read. Only upon proper consideration of each side of the discussion can I decide on a teaching style to support.

So, based on the paraphrase I created, you can clearly see how the discussion paragraphs should go. There are 3 comparison paragraphs covering:

- Electronic books
- Printed material
- My personal choice

Your personal choice needs to be allocated its own paragraph because you need to justify your decision based on the discussion of the 2 public considerations. It is not a part of the conclusion because the conclusion should serve as a wrap up of the discussion. The concluding paragraph should:

- Repeat the topic for the discussion
- Repeat the support for electronic books in a single sentence
- Repeat the support for printed books in a single sentence
- Repeat your point of view
- Close the discussion

The concluding paragraph is a paraphrase of the previous discussion. It is similar to the original paraphrase since it mentions the original topic, but changes the slant to restate the reasoning paragraphs you created instead of simply repeating the content of the original prompt.

Limit yourself to one topic per discussion paragraph. Complete the explanation of your reason within 5 sentences. Do not use 2 reasons per paragraph. It creates an under developed explanation and provides a lack of cohesiveness and coherence in the paragraph presentation. This is why it is important to outline your discussion before you start writing the draft of the essay. You only have 40 minutes, focus on clarity, not number of reasons, that will not increase your band score. In fact, the number of reasons are not even part of the band scoring considerations. Your score will be assessed mostly on the way by which you format the paper and the clarity of your explanations.

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