Topic : It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
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Nowadays, there are talented people in the world. It is common opinion that some people are born with some talents such as for sport or music but others are not. However, other people claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. In my opnion, I believe that some people are born with talents.
First of all, at the present there are many innate people who have their specific talents. For example, some children are not taught any skills such as for sport or music but they naturally do act such as playing musical instruments or controlling their skills when they are young. Any one did not teach them but they do some admirable action. This means that some children are born with some talents.
However, there are a lot of people without any talents so when they grow up, they try to learn some skills like early speaking or playing musical instruments. Nevertheless, many people try continously but they do not forgive up learning for special skills. As people develop their own ability, they can feel achievements. Afterall, When they are adults, they persieve strange feelings.
Having discussed the above, some people are born with talents. THis is lucky for them. Nevertheless, people are try to get special talents. Although I agree this statement, nutural is quite important for them. If they do not develop their innate talents, talents in them may decline.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Plz check my writing and what problem is in my writing.
Nowadays, there are talented people in the world. It is common opinion that some people are born with some talents such as for sport or music but others are not. However, other people claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. In my opnion, I believe that some people are born with talents.
First of all, at the present there are many innate people who have their specific talents. For example, some children are not taught any skills such as for sport or music but they naturally do act such as playing musical instruments or controlling their skills when they are young. Any one did not teach them but they do some admirable action. This means that some children are born with some talents.
However, there are a lot of people without any talents so when they grow up, they try to learn some skills like early speaking or playing musical instruments. Nevertheless, many people try continously but they do not forgive up learning for special skills. As people develop their own ability, they can feel achievements. Afterall, When they are adults, they persieve strange feelings.
Having discussed the above, some people are born with talents. THis is lucky for them. Nevertheless, people are try to get special talents. Although I agree this statement, nutural is quite important for them. If they do not develop their innate talents, talents in them may decline.