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Some people find advertisements amusing or annoying and they are not influenced by this


myahh 1 / -  
May 12, 2023   #1

advertising as a way to attract customers?



In this day and age, there is a controversial issue about whether customers are pleased or not when seeing an abundance of advertising means . In my opinions, I partly agee with these points of view for following reasons.

First and foremost, it is undeniable that advertisements are probably not make sense in public. Customers in 4.0 era - the era of ameliorating minds are aware of the fact that paying notice of quality, purpose is the most important step when considering to buy new products. Take an example of Banh Mi , known as a delicacy of Vietnamese dishes, is not much widespread in other countries such as American or France. However, Banh mi is not a low- quality food, it is just because of its limited advertisements.

Nevertheless, it is irrefutable that advertising plays an important role in people-buying choices . This is because of the appearance of such advertisements that people easily lay their trust on the brands they choose, and if there are appeciative feedbacks, it is not only are the customers benefited , but businesses also gain a lucrative advantage. For instance, by spreading by banners and videos, Mc Donalds hold its reputation of the most well-known fast food option when it comes to teenagers.

In conclusion, there are two school of thoughts about whether advertising is an attractive way or not to attract customers, and I either agree or disagree with those opinions. However, people should take these analysis into consideration in order to decide properly when choosing products.
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May 14, 2023   #2
Your prompt restatement is inaccurate. The original prompt requires you to reword the sentiment that people are annoyed by advertisments and they cannot be influence by advertisements. Points will be lost due to the partial inaccuracy of the representation. The writer's opinion is clear, but lacking in the discussion foundation or basis for the opinion, more points will be deducted.

When you state that you partially agree with the discussion, there are 2 things you have to accomplish in the reasoning paragraphs:

1. State why the reason the advertisements are effective.
2. Explain why the reason has limitations, thus rendering that reason invalid.

Your reasoning presentation does not work in a manner that will actually convince the examiner that you know what you are talking about. All because the discussion format being used does not live up to your opinion presentation. You will still be scored on your opinion writing but, it will more than likely be scored based on an under developed opinion presentation.

The conluding summary will more than likely be the main reason the essay will fail since it does not represent the writer's opinion and reasoning presentation properly. It will result in more task deductions since the conclusion is scored similarly in terms of task accuracy.
vietnamkun - / 1  
May 14, 2023   #3
In my point of view, i think that your essay have true reasons for annoying advertisements, but the problem is that it's still not enough. i'll write an essay on this topics too, and will take an eye at your essay before writing.


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