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People in Five Different Occupations Sleeping Patterns according to a Canadian study



Trias 23 / 27  
May 24, 2015   #1
The chart below shows the sleep patterns of people in five different occupations according to a Canadian study.

The chart gives information about a Canadian study in the daily sleeping hours of people whose jobs are doctors, business executives, full-time mothers, truck drivers and students. The most significant facts to emerge are students and full-time mothers have the longest time to sleep, while others have less sleeping time.

Moving to a more detailed analysis, students spend more time to sleep compared to people with other occupations at 8 hours from 11-12 pm to 6-7 am. Despite the equal sleeping duration in a day, mothers have a slightly different pattern when they go to bed at 10-11 pm and wake up at 5-6 am. However, they usually awake for two hours between their sleeping times at night, and then have a nap at noon from 1-2 pm until 3-4 pm.

On the other hand, business executives and truck drivers have 6 hours of sleep in a day with varied pattern. Albeit their sleeping time starts at around the same time as students, business executives wake up earlier at 4-5 am. That said, they have an hour more time to sleep than doctors.


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justivy03 - / 2265  
May 24, 2015   #2
Trias this is yet another great article, you leaned on the facts and figures and you brought analytical finding just as great.

- However, they are usually awake for two hours between their sleeping times at night, and then have a nap at noon from 1-2 pm until 3-4 pm.

Indeed this is a detailed analysis but I think you can elaborate more. I think you can further analyze the graph or the study to differentiate sleeping patterns.

Besides, the nature of the occupation one has, greatly affects their sleeping pattern. Not only that, the age also matters to the sleeping pattern of a person.

I suggest that you inject your own opinion at the end of every analysis that you make in order to add a personal touch to the analysis but this always depend on you.

Also, always check the flow of your analysis, from left to right or from top to bottom.

Keep writing

Cheers!!!


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