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IELTS- TASK 2-More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life



ravenet 6 / 22  
Feb 18, 2016   #1
More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

Introduction

It is true that many people migrate to cities for better living conditions. Although urban areas have numerous benefits for inhabitants, there are some serious such problems as pollution, lack of houses, and too crowded. In my view, governments should take appropriate steps to tackle these issues.

eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1170  
Feb 18, 2016   #2
More people tend to move to cities in order to build a fulfilling life. This results in a city life getting worse. The main problem of this cause is disposal of sewage and housing shortage and the most viable solution is a public awareness campaign warning people about the living condition. As you can see, I am very upfront about what government should do.
OP ravenet 6 / 22  
Feb 19, 2016   #3
Hi Eddies,

It is better, and I will learn from you.

Thank you


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