Some people prefer change while some dont -IELTS

Topic."Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, however think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Different people see life in different ways.Some want to keep their monotonous life unchanged. However others are more adventures and they keep their life changing . There are various reasons behind theses changes ,this essay will enlighten the causes.

Some people never change their daily routine,the reason would be they enjoy what they are doing and it is important to them.further more,many people agree their jobs are monotonous,but they say they are delivering a productive out put,for instance computer engineers . It is certain their job is most boring,but their work out put have great impact on the online world,and it passively help common people in large. Even though some people life style is tedious but they are happy what they are doing,and they are adhere to their life style

Having said that,some people frequently change their jobs and way of life. They get bored with tedious life,these individual seeks some kind of adventure in their life. There are many people that,they have changed their jobs and embraced thrilling occupation such as,mountaining,wild life adventure,and some time they dedicated their life towards charity works. Furthermore,some other individuals think their life is stagnated and they go on traveling,keep on change place and jobs for new experience. Some time change become imperative for self satisfaction.

To put it in nut shell,changing way of living is depend on person and their life style. Some changes are necessary for pursuit of carrier,and some life needs no change if they feel happy with environment,especially for older people change of place could have great impact on their routine life and they will lost in new way of life.

productive out put --> productive output

To put it in nut shell, --> To put it in nutshell,

.... very true :D


.... "monotonous life" .... well sounds a bit rude :D
Some fear changes while some others adore them.


There are various reasons as to why people react differently to changes and this essay is focused on discussing these reasons.
However, I prefer if you stated your opinion in the introduction itself. For example;
However, I personally welcome changes when they are necessary to life.


.... make sure you start with capital letters. It's a worthy habit even during practice sessions :)
Well.... computer engineers job is not at all monotonous, instead it is quite challenging and creative. You should have given an example of a more stereotype job like lift operator or janitor.


it depends/ it is depending