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IELTS: (people worked in 4 sectors in UK) DESCRIBE A TABLE


hoanghai549 5 / 13  
May 2, 2011   #1
The table showed how many people worked in 4 sectors in UK between 1998 and 2006 . In both years , the total workers divided into 5 different age profile had been a significant change .

In 1998, building sector had the largest number of people , having 112565 workers in the 18-25 age profile . Technology in the 56-65 age profile was notoriously the poorest number of people with about 800 workers . Education had the most popular workers from 26-35 age to 46-55 age. Hotel and catering does not have a remarkable change in the all age groups .

In 2006, technology was the greatest number of workers , having 454375 workers in 26-35 age profile . Education continued to be have many workers provided over 100000 workers in middle groups . Hotel and catering in all age groups was not near 20000 workers .

Give me advise . I always find a difficult way when I describe a table in ielts .

Real Fog 5 / 26  
May 2, 2011   #2
The table showed how many people worked in 4 sectors in the UK between 1998 and 2006 . In both years , the total number workers were divided into 5 different age groupsprofile had been a significant change .
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,324 129  
May 4, 2011   #3
Does it show only those 2 years or does it show all the years in between?
Do not say BOTH if it is more than two. If it is just about 1998 and 2006, do this:
The table showed shows how many people worked in four sectors in the UK during 1998 and 2006.

In both years , the total number of workers was divided into five different age profiles, and these reflected a significant change.

...was notoriously the poorest lowest number of people with...

Use a comma when the number is over 1,000. For example, 454,375.

I always find a difficult way when I describe a table in ielts .

Yeah, tables have information that is hard to explain. That is why a table is necessary! So, don't be discouraged. :-)


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