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The percentage of number of children in Australia, whose mothers were between 40 and 44 years old



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May 23, 2015   #1
The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.

The table gives information about the percentage of the number of children in Australia, whose mother was between 40 and 44 years old during the period 1981 to 2006. It is noticeable that from 1981 to 2006, most of these women gave birth to two children.

Moving to a more detailed analysis, the highest rate of woman giving birth to a couple of children was in 2006 at 38.3%, with only 0.1% gap with the second highest during 2006 when the rate was 38.2%. However, 1981 saw the lowest rate of children who was born by woman aged 40-44 with the rate at above a quarter.

Meanwhile, the least number of children ever born by these particular women varies over the timeframe. 2006 experienced a plunge to a low of just above one tenth in the rate of four or more children born by these women. While from 1981 to 1996, the lowest rate was in woman who gave birth to one child at below 10%.


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justivy03 - / 2265  
May 24, 2015   #2
- However, 1981 saw the lowest rate of children who wasare born byfrom a woman aged 40-44 with the rate at above a quarter.

Very good analysis and I guess all the points are accounted for as to referring the following;

- unit of measurement

- reference to numerical values in figures

- sticking to facts and detailed analysis of the given graph

- proof read and your absolutely good to go

There's not much to say, good luck!

Keep writing

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