The percentage of people populated in urban areas in certain parts of the world - IELST task 1.

summarise the information from the chart

The bar chart given shows the percentage of people populated in urban areas in certain parts of the world.It is clear from a first glance that the year of 2050 in most areas is anticipated to have the highest proportion of urban dwellers when compared with the rest two years.When it comes to 1950, the highest percentage of people dwelling in urban areas were North America, accounting for 64 percent while Africa's percentage was the lowest. Followed by North America was Oceania with 62%. Quite significant proportions of urban people came to Asia, Caribbean and Europe in number increasing.North America still topped the other regions in 2007 with 79% in terms of city dwellers. Along with North America, Caribbean was the second largest percentage at 76%. People settling up in Asian, Oceania and Europe zones occupied 41%, 71% and 72%, respectively. In contrast, the lowest proportion belonged to Africa by 37%.Regarding 2050, it is assumed that the proportions of both North America and Latin American, the largest ones, will be roughly the same (89% and 90%). The urban population of Europe will be 84% and that of Oceania will get 76%. Africa is expected to repeatedly have the smallest percentage of the five countries at 62%.

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I think you should divide your essay into paragraphs. In my opinion, ielts writing task 1 can always be divided into 3 paragraphs. Initially, you should write an introduction and overview. Then, your detail ideas will be presented in the next two paragraphs. Another thing to be noticed is you should put your ideas into group in a way that reader can find comparision.

You need to write less words. This is only a 20 minute task. The word allotment for this type of writing is 150-190 words. 200 words or more means you have eaten into the next essay time allotment. There is a difficulty in deciphering your information due to the lack of proper formatting, for which you will be penalized and heavy points deducted, which will result in a possible failing score for this essay. Use 3 paragraphs for the presentation, 4 paragraphs if you have enough information to do so. Do not just keep typing away, totally ignoring the word parameters and your errors in spelling, grammar, and conciseness. If you write less words, you can focus on the quality of your writing. If you leave the errors unchecked, then you will have even more percentage deductions, which means, your final score could be well under the 5 mark.