IELTS Task 1: The percentage of sports in the UK in 2010

The table shows the percentage of boys in two age different age groups who involved in five different sports, in the UK, in 2010.

Overall, it is clearly that the biggest percentage sport was football between aged boys 6-11 and 12-16 age groups, while swimming was the smallest percentage sports.

From the table, boys in football sport have more percentages than others about 87% for aged between 6 until 11, whereas the cricket be came second, about 45% of the total. Then, basketball has data namely 35%, followed by rugby has number 23% then has 19% of boys in this group for swimming.

In the other hand, when boys have aged between 12 until 16, has percentage 78%, is also shows football has the highest point. The second highest has 34% for cricket then basketball occupy the third highest about 25%. Followed by rugby has number 21%, while swimming has namely 19%.

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