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The Percentage of Varies Residents in Australia who Visit Some Places


erin24 12 / 13  
Jan 29, 2016   #1
The bar chart describes a percentage of varies citizen in Australia who came to some places. There is a value measured in proportion. Overall, the main fact that stands out, a percentage of various citizens in Australia who came to cinema is the highest proportion in each category.

Turning first, there are similar pattern of percentage of different residents in Australia who came to zoo and theatre. The highest proportion is new migrants who born in English-language states visit the zoo and theatre at 50% and around 25% respectively. The middle proportion is citizens who born in Australia come to zoo at around 42% and theatre at 20%. The lowest percentage is original migrants who born in other countries drop in to zoo at around 34% and theatre at 10%.

In contrast, at first glance, there are inverse pattern of proportion of various inhabitants in Australia who visit to library and cinema. The highest percentage of various residents in Australia who come to library is a new migrants who born in other states at around 54% and the lowest is residents who born in Australia at around 38%. On the other hand, the highest percentage of various people in Australia who visit cinema is inhabitant who born in Australia at 70% and the lowest is original migrants who born in other states at 50%.




vangiespen - / 4,137 1449  
Jan 29, 2016   #2
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