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IELTS TASK 1 : Planning new supermarket in Pellington (by upinipin)


upinipin 32 / 49 1  
Apr 29, 2014   #1
The graph shows Pellington map that population 120,000. There are three proposed sites for a new hypermarket. This supermarket will be pleased into side A, B, and C area.

In general, site A possible one location to build supermarket. It is in the middle town. Area plan B in countryside passed by motorway. Area plan C near from residential and industrial passed by railway.

The first possible location is in side A. This area will be crowded because there is in the middle residential. Side A near from traffic free zone and park. It is Easy for people to catch this area. However, this area passed by railway.

The second area is in side B. This area is in countryside. Countryside area are far from residential and industrial. Even though, side B passed by motorway. This area is more relax and have fresh air. The third area is in side C. This area is in countryside. It is more relax and near from residential and industrial. It will be gratify for people visiting this location. This area passed by railway.

Overall, the possible area to build supermarket is in side A. In side A more crowded than both (B and C) . Side A is easy to fine the location.



Pahan 1 / 1,906 553  
Apr 29, 2014   #2
The graph shows the map of Pellington map that , which has a population about 120,000 people,There arethat includes the three proposed sites, A,B and C, for a new hypermarket. This supermarket will be pleased into side A, B, and C area.

You seem to be having a good understanding about the structure :)
fikri 5 / 317 71  
Apr 29, 2014   #3
In general, site A possible one location to build supermarket.

in general, site A is one possible location to build supermarket

overall, you have a good idea o write this report, but you made mistakes in your several sentences which do not have verb, so pay more attention to your structure
Eva Novita Sari 47 / 71 2  
Apr 29, 2014   #4
This areais more relax and have fresh air.

connected with and
AND are used to connect two statement when the meanings of their predicates are the same
BOMAT_IRA 29 / 40  
Apr 29, 2014   #5
It is in the middle town.
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
Apr 29, 2014   #6
Note this points below retrieved from the same threads:
Diachronic maps
Intro: here you should state what the maps show
Overview: state what the direction of change is (is the city more modernized, has it turned to a tourist attraction/resort, etc)
Body: start with the most obvious changes and then try to cover all the changes.

Synchronic maps.
Intro: here you should state what the maps show
Overview: depending on what the purpose of those points are, give an opinion about which one may serve our purpose better.
Body: compare the two points

Remember: Bring simplicity and clarity. Do not make yourself too complicated :D
As I highlight "complicated" above, also it's always good to rewatch this YouTube:
zztrieuman 3 / 4 1  
Apr 30, 2014   #7
In Task 1 of the IELTS test, you ARE NOT required to give your personal opinion. So you should change your conclusion:
"Overall, the possible area to build supermarket is in side A. In side A more crowded than both (B and C) . Side A is easy to fine the location."


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