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· Task 1: The plans below show how the ground of a particular building has changed over time.


thucuyen1712 1 / -  
Apr 14, 2023   #1
·Task 1:
The plans below show how the ground of a particular building has changed over time.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.



This plan illustrates the changes of the ground floor or a particular building over the time from 1958 to present.
In general, this ground floor or building has been rebuilt for three various purposes of using such as an office, an apartment and a flower shop. While the kitchen was the only part that has had no changes, all other parts have been refurbished or removed.

From 1958 to 1984, the ground floor or the building was made use of being an office, on the contrary in the next 15 years, it became an apartment. The first difference was the bathroom and shower which replaced the toilet and the secretary's office at the left of the entrance of the office. Then, people deleted reception area and manager's office to build two bedrooms on the opposite side of the bathroom and shower of the apartment. While the kitchen remained the same usage in these two plans, the meeting room in the office was transferred into the living room. On the other hands, from 2000 to present, the ground floor or the building was changed to be a flower shop. Whereas in the last 15 years, there were two bedrooms at the right corner from the entrance, there was a declaration of one of which to create more room for flower and another bedroom was taken advantage as an office in flower shop. Moreover, people minimized the space of the bathroom and shower and changed it into the play area. There was also a reduction in size of living room to become gift cards.

Between the year 1958 and present, it is clear to observe how this ground floor or building has been changed. While the kitchen was still remained over the time, the toilet was widened to become play area and the assistant's office and the secretary's office were removed to make room for flower. People also made changed for the reception area at the right corner from the entrance which later was a place for flower. As well as the opposite side of the secretary's office was the manger office in the past, it has been replaced by the office in the flower shop at the present. And the final difference is the meeting room that now is used for gift cards.



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Apr 15, 2023   #2
This essay uses 382 words. That means the writer will be writing this essay well over the 20 minute time allottment. It is not going to be considered for a passing score in an actual setting as the essay will be incomplete in presentation. It will also but into the task 2 essay writing time, indicating that none of the essay tasks will be properly completed by the test taker. The task 1 essay must be completed within only 200 words, as suitable for the 20 minute writing allowance.

This plan

A plan is too general a term that could be misused for this presentation. A plan is not a suitable image identifier for a task 1 essay. The provided image is an illustrative diagram. Familiarize yourself with the image representations going forward. Proper image identification is part of the accuracy scoring considerations.

I will judge your assessment skills in your next task 1 essay. It is difficult to give an accurate review at this point because the essay does not meet the proper word count for the assigned report and image assessment.


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