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Playing game is not only fun if I win - there are many other factors I prefer in playing a game


jerry 17 / 10  
Sep 10, 2008   #1
This is the essay I've written

Playing game is only fun if you win. Do you agree or disagree with this idea?

Some people think that a game cannot be full without winning. I personally do not agree with this notion. After playing some games, I can realize that there are a lot of useful things that I could get from a game other from winning. They are working in team, gaining experiences, and relaxing.
EF_Team5 - / 1,586  
Sep 10, 2008   #2
"Some people think that a game cannot be fun without winning.

Whenever I play soccer, it brings me the experience of playing as a team.

Moreover, playing game will give me a chance to gain experience . Although I will be happy if I win, failure has its own values. After failing, I learn how to play efficiently to defeat the factors that lead to failure. The next time I play the same type of game, if I win, the win will be more meaningful than the win of the first try because I know that my efforts are compensated.

In many cases, I play game just for fun. It is not important whether or not I win. What I need is comfort . For example, computer games make me relax after hard days studying . While playing those entertaining games I really have fun. In a world with lots of stress in working and studying, it is irrefutable that fun in life is more or less important as winning .

In conclusion, although winning is important, there are many other factors I prefer in playing a game. When I play game, I cannot always win, but I will have fun because of those other things."


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