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The popularity of electric cars did not last long due to the limited power and mediocre speed.


rizaldohabibie 19 / 35  
Sep 20, 2016   #1
IELTS writing summary: Electric Car Around The Globe

In the early twentieth century, electric cars had been driven as renowned as gas-fuelled cars in North America until the popularity of electric cars did not last long due to the limited power and plodding speed.

Lately, Europe and China have tremendous intention to the electric vehicle as the government of China offers monetary incentive to individuals who purchase the electric cars as well as the company to produce. Innovations, at the moment, are gradually revealed in North America which those fascinate limited target consumers with the long-time single charge and high-speed acceleration electric sport car. Moreover, other American auto manufacturers are marketing electric cars for commuters in innovative design made with light composites and two seats and it aims to solve the matters to drive between lanes of stopped traffic.

Overall, beside all electric cars will help to decrease the amount of pollution, some will prevent it with elegance flair.

Yonathan 46 / 65 5  
Sep 20, 2016   #2
Hi Rizaldo..
Let me give you some advice

In the early twentieth century, electric cars ...
... offers monetary incentive to individuals(any individual) who purchase the electric ...
... revealed in North America which those fascinate limited target consumers (produce electric cars) with (...) and high-speed acceleration electric sport car(and fascinate limited target consumer) .

... for commuters in innovative design (which) made with(from) light composites and two seats ...

Thank you and keep writing...
ichanpants89 [Contributor] 16 / 777 309  
Sep 20, 2016   #3
Hi there. I made several revisions on your essay. Hope you can follow it through.

- ... electric cars hadhave been driven as...
- as well as the company to produce(I think this is hanging) .
- revealed in North America which those fascinate limited target consumers with the ...
- ...with light composites and two seats.(full stop here)and It aims to solve the ...
- Overall, beside all electric cars will helpin addition to decrease the amount of pollution, some some electric cars will prevent itthe issue with eleganceelegant flair.

There you go.


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