Potential new supermarkets in the city of Garldson

A breakdown of two potential locations (S1 and S2) for a new supermarket in the city of Garldson is indicated in map. Overall, while it can be seen that there is S1 potential outside of the town, S2 is located in the city center which have the largest population.

Looking at the information in more detail, S1 is on the north west of Garldson, between Hindon main road and railways, beside the main road which is close to the residential area of the town. S2 applies almost a whole of Garldson city center, and also near the housing area that opposite the industry.

The main road is linking to Garldson town center from Hindson, Bransdon and Cransdon which eoulf be no access to S2 by vehicle. In contrast,while in front of S1 lies Hindon main road, it would be difficult going to Bransdon and Cransdon. The supermarkets is close to the railways that connect from Hindon to Cransdon.

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A breakdown of two potential locations (S1 and S2) for a new supermarket in the city of Garldson is indicated in map. Overall, while it can be seen that there is S1 IS potentiaLY LOCATED l outside of the town, S2 is located in the city center which have HAS the largest population.

Looking at the information in more GREATER detail, S1 is on the north west of Garldson, between THE Hindon main road and railways, . SPECIFICALLY, beside the main road which is close to the residential area of the town. S2 applies almost HAS A BETTER LOCATION SINCE THE a whole of THE Garldson city center, and also IS LOCATED near the housing area that opposite the industry ZONE, ALL OF WHICH ARE WITHIN EASY ACCESS OF THE NEW SUPERMARKET.

The main road is linking LINKS to Garldson town center from TO Hindson, Bransdon and Cransdon which eoulf be no WOULD NOT BE EASILY accessED to BY S2 by USING A vehicle. In contrast,while in front of S1 lies ON THE Hindon main road, it would be MAKING IT DIFFICULT TO REACH difficult going to Bransdon and Cransdon. The supermarketsis WILL BE close to the railways that connect from Hindon to Cransdon.