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The power plant is utilizing sea waves in the energy producing process



mardian24 46 / 60  
Dec 1, 2016   #1
The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.

A breakdown of the process how to make power plant from sea wave is depicted in the two diagrams. Overall, it can be seen that there are three components, and simple process to produce electricity by exploiting sea water.

To begin with, there are some steps to build power plant. First of all, it is located on the coast line, exactly in cliff or sea wall. Afterwards, column is built on the cliff and in the sea to let sea wave coming through inside. Finally, turbine is set between two columns and there is chamber to receive sea wave.

On the other hand, the process to generate electricity is divided by four procedures. Firstly, wave enters into column and goes through the chamber to go up for surpassing the turbine. Secondly, turbine is rotated by water and then water goes down by helping from air through the turbine again which results same direction of turbine. Furthermore, sea wave will go further to the sea and electricity is produced owing to the rotation of the turbine. Last but not least, electricity can be used to turn on the lamp.


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SarlindaDS_27 42 / 51  
Dec 1, 2016   #2
Hello, Mr.Mardian :) Let me give you some corrections :)

... it is located on the coast line => coastline , ...
Afterwards , column is built on ...

... generate electricity is divided by =>into four procedures.
... turbine again which results[need preposition such as from or in ] same direction of [the] turbine.

Keep Writing :)


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