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IELTS: profits from natural resources make people ignore to preserve natural world


Helio 2 / 2 1  
May 24, 2013   #1
People are not paying attention to environmental protection. What is the cause and suggest solutions to deal with this issue?
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Despite the acknowledge of human about how serious the environmental problems are, we now seem to concentrate on something else, rather than on the persevation for the natural world. There are a number of reason causing this issue and each problem needs to be dealt in a particular way.

It is likely that one of the most prominent cause giving rise to this problem is people now could earn a lof of money by exploiting natural resources at the hard-line. As a result, they almost neglect to save environment. In addition to that, in some countries, especially developing countries, there is the lack of serious efforts and law enforcement on environment protection. For instance, punishment to the ecosystem destruction is not determent and radical.

Eventhough this issue is more and more consideralbly increasing throughout the world, there are some realizable solutions to cope with. Firstly, governments should apply the mineral exploiting standard to prevent misusing natural resources. As well as, authorities need to promulgate some serious laws to reduce the devastation and make all types of sectors in soviety coordinate more closely in protceting global environment. Furthermore, when every individual recognizes how serious the environment effects on their own lives, they will take interest in enviromental protection.

To conclude, the profits from natural resources make people ignore to preserve natural world. However, the opportune interference of government could prevent the environmental destruction.

dumi 1 / 6,927 1592  
May 24, 2013   #2
... What is the issue? You haven't told it clearly to the reader. I think you need a better understanding about how the essay structure should be.
Pahan 1 / 1,906 553  
May 25, 2013   #3
Even though this issue is more and more consideralbly increasing throughout the world, there are some realizable solutions to cope with.

Even though this issue is becoming more and more serious and dangerous, still there are effective solutions for protecting the environment.

Firstly, governments should apply the mineral exploiting standard to prevent misusing natural resources.

First, governments should take action in order to prevent misuse of natural resources. They need to introduce new laws, standards etc. in favor of protecting environment.

Also, governments need to corporate with one another in this regard. Protecting environment should be looked at as a global need though every human being needs to be conscious about it.
Habib Rastegar 8 / 18 1  
May 25, 2013   #4
There are a number of reason causing this issue and each problem needs to be dealt in a particular way.

There are a number of reasons which are the causes of this issue. Each problem needs to be dealt in a particular way.

a lof of money

a lot of money=too much money

In addition to that

in addition (to)


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