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The proportion of happiness of married and unmarried citizens living in the US according to age

May 23, 2023   #1

a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of happiness of married and unmarried citizens living in the US according to different age brackets, and how children affect the total rate of married couples.

Overall, it can be seen from the first chart that the married couples feel more satisfied with their live than the population who does not marry. Noticeably, having chilren or not does not influence the happiness percentage of individuals who are in marital status.

With regard to the first chart, in terms of married people, the gap in the happiness portion of four age ranges do not change considerably, with 45% of the youngest age group, followed by 44% of the 30-49-years-old and 65 plus age bracket. The middle-aged group (30-64 years old) shows the trough of about 40%, which is slightly lower in comparison with the others. Respecting those who has not married, at the age of 18-29, 30-49 and 50-64, the percent of residents falling into these categories feeling great pleasant witness a downward trend compared to married couples, which peak at around 21-22%, whereas, the figure for the oldest age group is marginally higher, to 34% of the total rating.

Concerning the second chart, regardless of having children or in childless marriage, people still get a positive attitude to life, with a similar pattern of incrementing from 41% to 44% through all kinds of ages.

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May 24, 2023   #2
We have to immediately address the word count of this essay. With 230 words, that means you have taken at least a half an hour or more to complete the analysis essay. The suggested time frame for completing this essay is no more than 20 minutes. That means you should be writing only 200 words and no more than that. You will have a problem with your writing time allowance during the actual test if you do not adjust your word count this early. Try to stay within 200 words only.

The summary overview is too confusing to follow for the reader. The summary overview must have at least 3 sentences in it. Each sentence must represent the individual information provided in the image. The reason for the division is because a run-on sentence, such as you have written, is difficult to follow and remember when one reads it. So you should keep it simple, easy to write and read, easy to remember.

Do not over write any paragraph use 5 sentences per paragraph to meet the time limit and word maximum requirement. Avoid run on and short sentences.

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