WRITING TASK 1 THE PROPORTION OF LEISURE ACTIVITIES PREFERENCE IN BOTH GENDER

The bar chart shows the participation of children in selected leisure activities in Australia

A breakdown of the proportion of several leisure activities taken a part by both male and female children in Australia is presented in the bar chart. Overall, it is immediately apparent that both sexes favor watching TV as their choices to kill their spare time.

Comparing the preference of both gender, male children dominated almost leisure activities. In electric computer, with just over four fifths, boys occupy the first place while this only accounts for 60% for woman. Likewise, this trend occurs in both bike riding and skate boarding in which the domination by around 10-15% is still shown by the boys. A different trend, on the other hand, witnesses in the figure for art and craft when females overpower man at 60% and 40% respectively.

When it comes to internal comparison, it is noticeable that there are three figures showing same proportion in males (bike riding, electronic and art& craft) while in females, this only occurs in both skate boarding and art & craft.

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"A breakdown of the proportion of several ..."
A breakdown of several leisure activities taken by both male and female children in Australia is presented in the bar chart

Comparing the preference of both ...
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In electric computer, with just over four fifths, [...] shown by the boys.
Just over four fifths of boys take part in electronic computer games, while only 60% girls do. Likewise, this trend of boys having 10-15% greater participation rates than girls applies to other activities as well, such as bike riding and skate boarding.

A different trend, (...) at 60% and 40% respectively.
The aforementioned trend is reversed, however, when analyzing arts and crafts, where girls participate more than boys, 60% to 40%, respectively.