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Proportion of water used for agriculture - writing task 1 test 1 in cam ielts practice


ABCDisme 1 / -  
Apr 6, 2021   #1

three purposes of how water is consumed



The pie chart illustrates 3 different purposes of how water is consumed in different parts of the world.
Overall, the proportion of water used for agriculture in South America, Africa, Central Asia and SouthEast Asia, while in North America and Europe, the largest segment belongs to industrial use.

In areas such as south America, Africa, South East Asia and Central Asia, agricultural use takes up over 80% of the total. Using water for domestic use and industrial use makes up only around 10% or below, except South America regarding domestic use.

Water consumption for industry keeps the top rank, accounting for approximately 50%, in North America and Europe, followed by agricultural use which takes a third of the pie chart. They consume a small amount of water, 15% of the total, for domestic use.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 10,552 3449  
2 days ago   #2
How many pie charts were involved? Each pie chart, since you refer to it in plural form, covered a different aspect of measurement. Each pie chart should therefore, be described in relation to the information it represents and the trend for each chart image. It is the inaccuracy of your summary overview, as well short descriptions in the body paragraphs (3 sentences are a must to meet the minimum word count), that has led to your under writing of text in the presentation. With only 134 words presented, you will receive penalties for not meeting the 150 minimum word count. Thus ensuring that your presentation will not meet the minimum passing standards for the task 1 test.


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