IELTS: Proposed sites for a new hypermarket in the city of Pellington.

The map shows three recommended location for a new hypermarket (A, B and C) in Pellington Town.

Overall, population in Pellington Town is 120,000 which is very big city. Therefore, it needs good attentions for building new hypermarket.

To begin with, recommended location of A for hypermarket is in residential area. It is near with industrial area and with a traffic-free zone and a park then it near with a railway, also. Moreover, location of B and C are in the countryside. The sites can be compared in terms of access by motorway for location B and by railway for location C.

Interestingly, location of A is an area more near with Hampford than location of B and C. Whereas location of C is strategically area because near with an airport on the west side.

To summary, location in site A and site C are more well to build new hypermarket than in site B.

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when you put 'also' in the end of the sentence, you do not need to put comma before it

The map shows three recommendedproposed locations for a new hypermarket (A, B and C) in Pellington Town.


Well, it is safe to comment what is presented by the map. So, you should not include the following in these sentences;



Instead, tell what you observe there;
Overall, the site A is located in a residential area in the township while B and C are located in countryside.

A key point in the writing task 1 is the differences and similarities. Personally, i prefer to explain the detail differences in the first body paragraph and in the second body paragraph i will discuss about similarities and interestingly, the approach is;

1. Introduction ; general information
2. Overview ; main trend
3. Body paragraph 1 ; detail information of differences
4. Body paragraph 2; detail information of similarity and interestingly


In conclusion, site A is the strategic area to establish a new hypermarket where is located between residential and industrial areas, and is connected with railway.