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What are pros and cons of job hopping ?


HolyzNero 1 / - 1  
Mar 30, 2017   #1

Job Hopping



Nowadays, in the modern society, the definition of Job-Hopping is widely spreading among the youth generation. There is a fact that young people prefer job hopping to just sticking with only one job for a long time. It can put a positive and also negative impact on a carrer, depends a lot on the circumstances of every individual. In this essay, i am going to analyze both points of view.

Firstly, it is undeniable that various jobs can bring young people a lot of different experiences which they are seeking and in need to get recognized. Working in diverse environments will make people become more active and more dynamic, even more versatile. Furthermore, it is a common thing that working in the same occupation for years will make you tedious and feeling is one of the most significant aspects that affect working productivity. This brand new thinking of job is just a sharp sword that helps young people to strive strongly towards their futures. However, any sharp swords always have two edges.

Changing occupations frequently means that you can't gain much experience and expertise in your specific major, and also job security which is a thing that a steady job can get. Thus, every company may recognise the loyalty and professions of employees to consider the promotion. On the other hand, the one who often changes jobs may be seen as unreliable and can lost a lot of benefits that could be for the long-term employees. The most tremendous things that everyone desires is job security, whereas changing jobs always goes along with risks, staying in one jo can meet this demand.

Each type of working style has its own pros and cons. The other's advantages is what the left-over lacks, it is all about the strategy that young people have to consider to make good and suitable decisions for their careers.

Holt - / 7,530 2001  
Mar 30, 2017   #2
Tu, be careful of the way that you spell your words. You will get marked down for every word that is misspelled such as "carer" for "career' and "jo" for jobs. This carelessness in the way that you developed the essay will have an effect on your English familiarity and grammar accuracy scores. Two criteria that, when combined, could spell the passing or failing of your essay score. These are easily correctable errors that I hope to see you improve upon with your next essays. Now, I do not want to harp only on the negatives of your essay because you did do some things right. Those right things have to to do with the strength of your reasoning and logic. Though your grammar tends to be problematic, it does not take away from the fact that the essay contains an acceptable discussion and can still be easily understood despite the grammar setbacks. So, you did a good job just the same.


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