Hello I just registered, this is my first post, would love some feedback on my assignment, I've been browsing for a while and I noticed some of you guys are amazing at all this grammar stuff, anyway thanks in advance here is the text:
What I did this weekend
I woke up at 6:30, I took a shower, got dressed, drank a glass of milk and went out to take the bus.
I arrived to school at about ___am, I had English class, so I went directly to my classroom. We had an exam that day. After that at around ___pm I took the bus back to Apizaco, and from there the bus back to my house. I got home at ___pm, I ate chicken with my mom and my brother. I did my chores around the house, later that night my mom, my sisters and I had some coffee, I changed into my pajamas and went to sleep.
The next day I woke up, and then I got up at 9:00 am, I took a shower, then I got dressed, my mom and I cooked breakfast. We went to church at 12:00 o'clock, went back home, then after that I went shopping for clothes and shoes with my aunt. We went to many different stores. Later I returned home, my grandma and I ate enchiladas, then I did my homework. In the evening I made some chocolate milk for dinner. After dinner I brushed my teeth, put on my pajamas and finally went to sleep.
That is what I did this weekend.
I woke up at 6:30, I took a shower, got dressed, drank a glass of milk and went out to take the bus.
Just some gramatical points;
"I woke up at 6:30, took a shower, got dressed, drank a glass of milk, and went out to take a bus"
I arrived to school at about ___am, I had English class, so I went directly to my classroom.
I arrived in school at~. Since I had Englsh class, I went to my class room directly.
We had an exam that day. After that at around ___pm I took the bus back to Apizaco, and from there the bus back to my house.
"We had an exam during the class. After I took the exam, I took a (time ) bus to Apizaco and went back to my house.
I got home at ___pm, I ate chicken with my mom and my brother. I did my chores around the house, later that night my mom, my sisters and I had some coffee, I changed into my pajamas and went to sleep.
I got to home at (time)pm, and I ate chicken with my mom and with my brother.
The next day I woke up, and then I got up at 9:00 am, I took a shower, then I got dressed, my mom and I cooked breakfast.
"The next day, I woke up at 9:00 am, took a shower, and got dressed as I did yesterday. My mom and I cooked breakfast together."
We went to church at 12:00 o'clock, went back home, then after that I went shopping for clothes and shoes with my aunt.
"My mom and I visited a chirch noon and went back again. In the afternoon, I went shopping for clothes and shoes with my aunt."
We went to many different stores. Later I returned home, my grandma and I ate enchiladas, then I did my homework.
"We went to many differnt stores, looking for what we wanted. After I ate enchiladas with my grandmother at home, I did my homework."
In the evening I made some chocolate milk for dinner. After dinner I brushed my teeth, put on my pajamas and finally went to sleep.
That is what I did this weekend.
Good Luck!
Thank you :)
