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The Rate of Boy and Girl Students Passing The Exam Based on Subject of Study



Febri91 5 / 6  
Jan 18, 2016   #1
The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011.

The bar chart compares the percentage of boy and girl students passing the exams based on subject of studies from 2011 to 2011. At first glance, science studies have a larger successful student in the exams than social studies, while girl students are most dominant than boy students in every subject of studies except geography.

Regarding to science studies, computer science, mathematic, chemistry, and physic, the most girl students are success in computer science exam, at 56.3%, compared to 42.1%, boy students. The rate of Girl students is also larger than boy rate in other science examinations. For Mathematics and physic examinations, girl students are far less than boy students, while in chemistry examination, girl students have twice larger than boy students.

Turning to social studies which are history, geography, and foreign languages, the most subject that boy students are more successful than girl students is geography, at less than a third compared to more than a fifth, while in the other social examinations, girl students are still more dominant, despite just a very small number.


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vangiespen - / 4077  
Jan 19, 2016   #2
Febri, the mode of writing that you used in developing this essay report was casual and enjoyable. It makes the essay relaxing to read while never missing out on the information that the graph provided. You used connecting words properly and have a moderately difficult vocabulary. Whatever problems the essay has in terms of grammar did not prevent you from creating a well developed essay, in terms of data presented.

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