The ratio of men and women teachers in six distinct levels of educational institutions in the UK

Uk Teachers statistics

The bar chart compares the ratio of men and women teachers in six distinct levels of educational institutions in the UK in 2010.
Overall , the percentage of female teachers tends to be outnumbered the figure of male teachers in lower levels. However , at higher levels , the percentage of male teachers in the United Kingdom was higher than the figure of female teachers.

From the chart, we can see that the ratio of female teachers in nursery school and primary school was dominated the percentage of male teachers around 90%. In addition , in secondary school , the percentage of female teachers was higher than the ratio of male teachers . with about 53%.

Moreover , the percentage of teachers in the UK in 2010 , both male and female was equal in the college. However , in private training institute and university , the ratio of male teachers was outnumbered , with higher about 50% àn around 70% , respectively in the United Kingdom in 2010,

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@volevy02009
a problem that I could see from your essay is the repetition of words. For example, in the second sentence of your overall para, u can write: the reverse could be witnessed in higher levels of education