Real traveling vs reading books - discuss one reason and why you agree or disagree.

Travelling to other places to learn the culture seems inconvenient compared to learning just as much from books, film, and the Internet. However, you don't know if most of the information is true. Some authors disrespect the culture of other countries or exaggerate it deeply, which leads to there being many unreliable documents. Travelling allows you to engage in local people's life directly, interact with them in person and listen to their story. By this you gain in-depth understanding and also empathize with their story, therefore, it solves every argument related to their culture. For instance, a famous Vietnamese youtuber named Khoai Lang Thoang once travelled to India for several days. During the journey, he discussed how Indian people eat with their hands. Despite negative judgment about how unhygienic the culture is, eating with hands in India is rooted in the ancient practice of Ayurveda and a belief in connecting with food on a sensory level, stimulating digestion and encouraging mindful eating.

I am not sure if you are writing this as a part of an English writing exercise or if this is a part of a Task 2 essay practice test. I'll give you generic pointers for now.

First of all, you need to learn to use paragraphs to help make your response easier to read. Write the introduction to the topic first. You can use 3 sentences for that. Make the 4th sentence your opinion.

Open a new paragraph after that statement. Fully explain the reason that you support. I like how you used examples and considerations from your own culture that helped to drive your point home.

Your final paragraph should be the conclusion that helps you to summarize the previous discussion. You have that presented in this version, but it is difficult to find because of the lack of proper formatting in your presentation.