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Reasons for why people attending colleges or universities?


PATEL RAJ 1 / -  
Apr 12, 2013   #1
According to my views, There are many reasons of attending college.But these reasons may differ for every student.

Firstly,If student has rich-family background and if he/she is involved in bad habits then the reasons for them to attend college may be to grow social network,to spend money lavishly, to make college a campus/go-down of taking drugs or doing some other illegal activities,etc. except these they could not think of any other reasons.

secondly,If student is poor then he/she would attend college so that he/she could increase their knowledge and get a better degree in order to get a better job and set their career. Their main target would be to fulfill their parent's wish and earn lota and lots of money to satisfy their parents need.

Moreover, people attend college so that he/she could be able to sit in the examination block. The reputation of the college also important because of that the quality of the students can be known.

Thirdly, If student is a good spots person.Then, he/she would attend college to get professional knowledge in that particular sport and also that the teacher would pass him/her in out in the examination. Moreover he/she could go further in that particular sport by using the college as a staircase toward their goal to become a successful sports person.

Fourthly, There are student who want to get experience , so that they undertake management of various curricular activities and they also make many new friends.

At-last, I would conclude my essay saying that there are numerous number of reasons of attending college but it mainly depends on the ambition of the student that how he/she leads their own life?

dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
Apr 12, 2013   #2
According to my views, There are many reasons of attending college.But these reasons may differ for every student.

... This introduction is a bit too short. Introduce your topic with a better entrance to your essay. Also, briefly mention about the reasons you are going to talk about in the body para. If this is for IETLS or TOEFL, two reasons even do enough. Take these reasons to body paras and support them with a specific examples;

The numbers of students who aspire to get admission to colleges or universities are ever increasing. There are many different reasons for this trend and they differ from student to student. However, in my view, there are (number) main reasons that compel most of the students to pursue a tertiary education.


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