The report about ten nations dominating the world in the rice industry in thousands of tons

Writing task 1 of The Ielts exam

This is the report about ten nations dominating the world in the rice industry in thousands of tons (tot) in 1999.
Overall, it is evident that on the global scale, 9 of 10 countries came from Asian, whereas there was only the USA. While China experienced the greatest amount of rice planted, the US truly stood at the lowest level.

As is shown by the bar graph, the whole of the rice production in China and India accounted for extremely high degrees (192,971 and 122,244 tot respectively) in 1999. In descending order, such countries as Indonesia, Bangladesh, Viet Nam, Thailand, Malaysia and Japan, achieved figures on a scale from 12 to 47 tot.

In addition to that, it is obvious to clarify Philipines produced nearly 2 tot more rice than the US in the year mentioned

@Hannah Trang
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