People nowadays start interested in History of building or house
In some countries ,more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.
What are the reason for this?
How can people research it?
There is a trend in some nations today that residents living in their buildings start researching the history of them.The reasons for doing this may come from personal interests or aiding people value their current home more.People can easily finding their buildings information via surfing the Internet as well as look at aged newspaper or books available in local libraries.
To begin with ,the hectic life nowadays does not leave much time for people to relax and calm.Therefore ,it is hard for them to maintain difficult pastimes such as playing chess ,making toys which require non-stop practice and amend advanced skills.Researching history of a particular construction, in the other hand, can still provide for researchers a sufficient amount of knowledge they wish to achieve without long time focusing.For example ,after leaving workplace and doing housework ,officers could spend sometime looking into reading materials which relevant to their buildings to acquire deeper knowledge to gossip with their families, peers or share on online forums.This not only results in widening their horizons but also constructing their confidence in their daily conversations.In addition ,by spending time and effort into research work ,when the final outcome is shown ,let say it is previously a hundred year- old hotel and used to serve the elite may encourage modern tenants feel proud of it.
The sources for a historical building vary from the Internet,books, magazines or outdated articles.Another useful way to find and exchange knowledge about the building is register relevant forum where people are able to discuss and share their mutual objects .
Bottom line ,researching about building where people occupying is not only satisfying their hobbies but also bringing the chance to communicate with others and boost the researchers' confidence as a whole.Holt Educational Consultant - / 14,835 
4783 The writer has provided an acceptable restatement + opinion response to the essay. It created a very strong basis for the succeeding discussion. Then, the discussion fell apart.
It will be best not to confuse the research of architectural history with the past time of people. That presentation really confused the paragraph as it is not relevant to the question being asked. Referring to historical architecture interests would have been the best place to start the discussion. The reasons for the interest were okay at first, but the mention of "gossip" was out of place. "Discussion" or "shared interests" would have created a better reference point. The term "gossip" is not academic and has a negative connotation that should not be attached to the discussion.
The explanation about how these interests can be pursued is severely under - developed. It does not offer a solid explanation in the same manner that was developed for the previous paragraph. The writer should always present a balanced and well connected discussion from one paragraph to the next.
