The Sales fluctuations of two popular in Europe imported products: coffee and bananas

The tables give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables present information about the number of coffee and bananas product from Fairtrade-labelled in five different countries of Europe in two periods, 1999 and 2004. Unit is measured in millions of Euros. Overall, it can be seen that the most noticeable increasing of coffee sales was the United Kingdom, while Switzerland experienced the same trend in Fairtrade-Labelled bananas sales

According to the data, United Kingdom was the highest sales number in 2004, at 20 million, which grew from starting point at 1.5 million in 2004. The number of product selling in Switzerland during 2004 showed two times higher than 1999, while Belgium only experienced a moderate increase of 0.7 million in sales figure over 5-years. Denmark and Sweden presented the similar number on coffee sales, which increased slightly of 0.2 million in 2004.

Regarding to bananas sales, Switzerland experienced the highest number of sales in 1999, around 15 million, and this also showed the highest rise to 47 million compared to other countries. UK and Belgium started from 1 million and 0.6 million in 1999, and this figure rose slightly to 5.5 and 4 million, respectively in 2004. Interestingly, Sweden and Denmark presented similar trend, which showed a decline during the periods.

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