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Could a Saturn Moon Harbor Life? (TED Summary)



fauzankrn 16 / 15  
Oct 18, 2016   #1
Cassini Spacecraft had landed and reported that there was a strange warm and geologically active region at the southern tip of Enceladus, the small moon of Saturn. In 2005, there was a south polar region with the tiger-stripe fractures image captured by Cassini. Three years later, the spot had half in darkness was caused by southern hemisphere. Interestingly, the discovery of towering jet found that there was an ice crystal eruption with water vapor from those fractures at the south pole. However, this phenomenon give presumption to space scientist today that there is a possible environment in Enceladus can support prebiotic chemistry and form a sustain life later. Scientists are very excited to wait for 2 years later to see the development of Enceladus south pole whether the site can change become an environment or a zone that suitable to living organisms.

Carolyn Porco
Source: TED

icho1250 2 / 2  
Oct 18, 2016   #2
Excellent essay I think you should develop a little more
justivy03 - / 2265  
Oct 18, 2016   #3
Hi Fauzan, here's another one from my end;

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- tip of Enceladus, thea small moon of Saturn.
- In 2005, there was ain the south polar region
- with thethere was a tiger-stripe
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- However, this phenomenon givegave a presumption
- Enceladus that can support prebiotic chemistry
- and form a sustainable life later.
- Scientists are very excited to wait forand are waiting for 2 years,later to see the development
- change and become an environment or a zone
- that can be suitable to living organisms.

There you have it Fauzan, well, this is a very interesting summary essay and a very promising findings from our scientist friends.


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