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In the modern world, schools are no longer necessary because there is so much information available through the internet that they can just as well study at home. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
Now-a-days, the internet is the key source of information. Even the source has been using in education. This trend comes up with a concern that there is no use for educational institutions because people would educate them by online learning at home. In this essay, I will present my disagreement along with rational reasons with this concern.
Skilled trainers can effortlessly be found in any learning institutions. They are not only responsible for teaching, but also motivating, encouraging, and monitoring their pupils through interesting learning styles. To illustrate, trainer's watchful eyes are able to examine learners' activities in order to nurture. In addition, the environments of schools are a key factor in order to develop students' communication skills, interpersonal skills, and other skills by assigning variety of projects within time-frame. Such experiences from schools ensure the comprehensive development of learners.
Moreover, the professional trainers provide lectures related to practical and theoretical ideas. For example, trainers mostly share their own experience regarding workplaces that learners are going to face in the future, whereas online learners may not get these experiences. Nonetheless, web pages is becoming predominant sources of data, even school professors also use the sources. It is evident that the source is not able to guide people in effective and efficient way to be developed.
To be concluded, although, vast information come from web sites, professional know the best way how teach to student in real sense. In my opinion, school training has significant influences on pupils that are inevitable rather than online programs. In this regard I am not convenient that the internet will replace the schools in terms of the quality of education.
Thanks.
It will be grateful if you give separate band for each criteria. like TR, CC, LR, and Crammer.
In the modern world, schools are no longer necessary because there is so much information available through the internet that they can just as well study at home. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
schools are obsolete?
Now-a-days, the internet is the key source of information. Even the source has been using in education. This trend comes up with a concern that there is no use for educational institutions because people would educate them by online learning at home. In this essay, I will present my disagreement along with rational reasons with this concern.
Skilled trainers can effortlessly be found in any learning institutions. They are not only responsible for teaching, but also motivating, encouraging, and monitoring their pupils through interesting learning styles. To illustrate, trainer's watchful eyes are able to examine learners' activities in order to nurture. In addition, the environments of schools are a key factor in order to develop students' communication skills, interpersonal skills, and other skills by assigning variety of projects within time-frame. Such experiences from schools ensure the comprehensive development of learners.
Moreover, the professional trainers provide lectures related to practical and theoretical ideas. For example, trainers mostly share their own experience regarding workplaces that learners are going to face in the future, whereas online learners may not get these experiences. Nonetheless, web pages is becoming predominant sources of data, even school professors also use the sources. It is evident that the source is not able to guide people in effective and efficient way to be developed.
To be concluded, although, vast information come from web sites, professional know the best way how teach to student in real sense. In my opinion, school training has significant influences on pupils that are inevitable rather than online programs. In this regard I am not convenient that the internet will replace the schools in terms of the quality of education.
Thanks.
