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Both schools and parents should be responsible for solving eating problems of children.



Diqon 10 / 32  
Oct 8, 2015   #1
It is very helpful to give me feedback.

These days, there are many young men had problems an unhealthy lifestyle. This is caused several activities that lack of physical exercise and sport. While some people assume that parents and schools should take away responsible to reduce this issue, I too believe that government also must inform how to solve or might provide equipment for some solutions.

Recently, a famous magazine gives information, many children have problems regarding fat and obesity, this is effected by their activities just sitting down in front of television and there is no a balance diet, because parents have a busy time, no time to prepare a hygienic food at home so that most children eat some fast food which are less nutrition and vitamin of diet.

Less control in school becomes students often not to appreciate foods that they eat. Sport schedule may be one solution to control this problem. Children should do sport like soccer to manage their body called a balanced diet. Besides, take a walk to go a school is a little solution that controlling a good activity because when they are walking a body can produce sweat meaning they could have gotten a body healthy reducing a fat or obesity.

Another important thing is government action, the government should demonstrate how to do a balance diet, consume some fruits and vegetables, going to gym and field to catch sport, if that is done, it can be a best solution to manage an unhealthy problem.



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