When does someone become an adult? Responsibility of an adult.

Dear my follow student,
Can you help me the topic of IELTS?
GT: In some countries, age of 18 means adults, while in other countries, it should be older. Give your own opinion and talk about the responsibility of an adult.

I know there are many responsibilty in the adults' life,such as the responsibility to the family, the responsibility to the society, the responsibility to our country. But I believe my imagination is not enough,maybe YOU can give me some meaningful advice and let me express many more profound ideas.

lots of thanks in advance and be blessed

xuelai

Great idea. This is the age of COLLABORATION, and it is great to get a diversity of ideas. Posting a question like this on an online forum is a good way to do some original research. If you go to other people's threads and helped them, you can ask them to visit this thread. With enough work, you can get opinions from many people and write a great article.

But anyway, about the IETLS... google this: how to write paragraph topic sentences.

That is the most important thing to do. If you begin each paragraph with a good topic sentence, the essay will be strong. The paragraph can have explanations and examples to support the idea in the topic sentence.

So, if your essay has 5 paragraphs, it might have 3 big ideas. Each body paragraph is an idea.

Here is my contribution: Someone is an adult when they know how to control their emotions. You can be an adult if you control your emotions, and some people are older than you but they are not adults because they cannot control their emotions.

:-)