'Sophisticated wearable headset'. Undoubtedly, it is tricky to learn tonal language nowadays.

From autism to Chinese, a headset to help you with your language (Summarizing)

Undoubtedly, it is tricky to learn tonal language nowadays. However near the future it will not due to the sophisticated wearable headset.

This advancement of technology was produced for autistic people and people who have speech disorder. Its name is SayWAT which able to generate feedback through Google Glass to the user. By using G. Glass's microphone, it can tell the user if the voice is too loud or too low and shows it within the glass.

The system has been tested by several occasions with some people and the feedback comes with positive results. However the feedback of the ptich has difference outcome because of specific feedback, according to the inventor.

It is also plausible to get live feedback of international language by SayWAT, yet it would be difficult due to lack of computational ability.

Hi, Robert. I made some revision on your essay. I hope you can follow it through:

- Undoubtedly, it is tricky to learn tonal language nowadays.I modified this sentence into:Learning tonal language is undoubtedly tricky.
- However,(a comma is necessary)near the future it will not happenbe the same due to the sophisticated wearable headset in the future.

I suggest you to add one sentence at least in your introductory paragraph. An essay is ideally contain three sentence in one paragraph.

- Its name is SayWAT. It is which able to generate feedback ...
- The system has been tested by several occasionstimeswithby some people.(full stop)andUltimately, the feedback comes with positive results.
- However, according to the inventor, the feedback of the ptich has differencedifferent outcome because of specific feedback, according to the inventor(this sounds hanging) .

With some polishing, I am sure that you will be able to improve your writing. Stay positive and keep writing.

Hi! I have some advice for you:

it can tell the user this sentence is the fact so use simple present and it shoud be

it tells the user

for autistic people and people who have speech disorder this sentence explains about the disease so you need to mention them instead of the people who owned it and it should be

for autism and deafness

However, according to the inventor, the feedback of the pitch has different outcome because of the specific feedback. , according to the inventor.

hi @zul2805_es
let me give you some suggestion


as we have known that after modal we have to put bare infinitive so that you need a verb.


the technological advancement leads people to be more autistic .....

hope this helps,
thanks
jawa