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Writing Task 2 - speaking local language helps to understand culture of a country?



Abrahamlincoln 54 / 50  
Oct 27, 2016   #1
Some people think that a person can never understand the culture of a country unless they speak the language. Do you agee with this opinion?

The majority of people regard that to attain valuable insights of others cultures. It is compulsory to speak the same language as they use. I would regard that this idea is true. Even thought, for some aspects, I have an opposite opinion.

On the one hand, the language can reflect people's culture. This is because it is an essential tool to communicate and scholars can analyze people's behavior through how they use the language. So if people speak the language of a country, they attain an array of cultural information. For example, it has been known that nearly all Sundanese people find a difficulty how to make a sound of letter "P" properly. They cannot pronounce distinctly between letter P, F and V. As a result, foreign people realized that they should not force them to pronounce those letters correctly since it is one of their behaviors that hard to be addressed.

On the other hand, people have an opportunity to understand other culture without speaking their language. There are several activities could be carried out to get more comprehensive understanding regarding the culture of a country. The first method is to read book and journal. That provides a lavish number of information of the country regarding their behaviors, characters and how people interact and mingle with their neighborhood. It also supplies recent data since cultural researches have been conducted annually. In addition, traveling abroad will be a beneficial factor to understand a culture because people are able to interact directly with native citizen and adapt with new cultures they believe.

In conclusion, it is clear to me that although learning language helps citizens to understand about other culture. There are alternative methods which more effective to gain a large number of information such as reading the cultural book and watching a movie.

alfa7 19 / 22  
Oct 27, 2016   #2
Even thought ,Eventhough , for some aspects, ...

... it is an essential toolmethod to communicate and scholars ...
["tool" could not applicable in this context] So [you should insert coma in here] if people speak the language ...
... distinctly between letter P, F andor V.

... a beneficial factor to understand athe culture because people (...) adapt with new cultures they believe.

... although learning language helping citizens to understand ...

note: keep writing and go ahead
lanazaldo 7 / 10  
Oct 27, 2016   #3
hi mr lincoln..
please let me.. please..
to suggest you some advice.. :)

The majority of people regard that to attain valuable insights of others cultures[you need the next sentence as it is a clause that need subject and verb] .

I would regard that this idea is true. Even thought, for some aspects,...[you need to make it as compound sentence, connect these two sentences together with even though conjunction]

... it is an essential tool[method / means / mechanism] to communicate and scholars ...
..., they attain an array of[much][an array is for countable noun, but 'information' is uncountable noun] cultural information.
... people find a difficulty how[just come directly to the to infinitive] to make a sound of ...
As a result, foreign people realized[realise][you want to explain the fact, so you need present tense] that they should not (...) their behaviors that [is] hard to be addressed.

KEEP WRITING, MATE!!!
keep spirit!
it is 7 days left!!
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