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IELTS TASK 1: Sport in UK - boys interested to play football



Eva Novita Sari 47 / 67  
May 1, 2014   #1
The table provides information percentage of school aged boy in two different age groups who participated in 5 different sports in the UK in 2010.

In general, there are sports that are liked by boys in age 6-11 and age 12-16.

To begin with, Sports in the UK are football, basketball, cricket, rugby, and swimming in 2010. However, people in there have different participated. In the first, boys 6-11 are interested to play football approximately 87, however, in begin to decrease which boys like basketball almost 35, and increase again that boys like cricket approximately 45. By contrast, some boys again are interested toward rugby just almost 23, approximately 19 like swimming.

On the the hand, boys 12-16 are interested to play football approximately 78, almost 25 boys like basketball which it begin to decrease slightly. However, it climbs ever higher toward cricket that liked by boys approximately 34, continue to fall to below toward devotee rugby approximately 21, and approximately 19 boys like swimming.

To sum up, many boys in UK are most interested toward football than other sports, and swimming is lowest devotee.


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Pahan 1 / 1824  
May 1, 2014   #2
The table provides information about the percentage of school aged boys in two different age groups who participated in 5 different sports in the UK in 2010.

In general, there are sports that are liked by boys in age 6-11 and age 12-16.

This is a very poor overview. This does not reveal any kind of information or background idea about what the table presents to the reader. I have provided two overview statements in two other threads on the same topic.


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