I started learning English for a good job in the future

study and practice of english language

Daily, I often get up at 7 am. then, I start to study English. This makes me feel extremely relaxed. I'd like to talk about one of my days. Now, my mood is very good. Because I learned a few vocabularies and watched youtube. As you see, I watched youtube which helped me study skills listen. It was funny, huh? Although I'm not good at English, someday I will be better, So I try hard to study English. I study English because I wanna have a good job in the future. this afternoon I get up quite late which makes me feel bored, tired, and grumpy. I wish, one day not far, I can curb my sleep. Finally, I write a blog to advance skills in my English. If it is not good, you can answer. This helps me better and have more experience for next time

The paragraph is written in reverse. The topic sentence, regarding what you will be writing about should be first (I'd like to talk about one of my days). Followed by what time your day starts ( I often get up), then the activity that starts your day (My mood is good when I start by studying English). The rest of the essay, about how you study and practice the English language can then follow. Remember that when you write an action paragraph, you need to outline the order in which these actions will be performed in the draft. Line then up from the first action, to the last. By doing so, you can develop a more understandable essay. If possible, avoid using English slang words (wanna) in your practice essays because you are not allowed to use slang words in academic writing. You might as well get used to it early on so that it does not become a habit for you.