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3 steps how to hack our brain to make our dreams come true



agungdanprakoso 5 / 4  
Sep 20, 2016   #1
What is the bigest question of human ? in majority, the widest question of people is how to come true their dream and purpose. Now, i want to discuss regarding TED video that gives us some tricks and method to help easily for reaching our goals.

According to Maya Angelou, a solitary fantasy can transform a million reality and just three bold steps can transform one reality yours. That is the exceedingly big quotation. The video explains that there are 3 steps to reach our goal into reality. Firstly, you have to draw a picture that contain about our dream and embed the picture on the wall or every where that you can see it easily. seeing the picture can be simultaneous our brain to make strong desire. Every morning and night when we wake up and sleep the picture will remind us related to what our goal are. Secondly, you have to believe what is your planing ? what is your imagination ? and what is your goal ? belief is the crucial key to make your dream comes true. Some days, if your belief is degradation, just see your big picture again and again. It is so helpful to raise steady willpower. Lastly, action is the last step to approach the goal. Do not forget to make list to do. Time by time, your list to do will be full of checklist. And soon with unintentionally, the goal is exceedingly close.

In illation, just draw your dream on the big paper, believe it, and action. You do not realize that your goal will come true.

Jnur 5 / 8  
Sep 20, 2016   #2
Hiii agung,..

Your text quite easy to easy to read. Yet, next time you should make attention on your spelling and your thought.

What is the bigestbiggest question....
what is your planingplanning ?

... paragraph to make it clear "In majority, the widest question ..."

embed the picture on the wall or every whereeverywhere that you can see it easily
Alamsyah Ismail 24 / 38  
Sep 20, 2016   #3
Hello agungdanprakoso
i have some advice to you

question of people is how to come true their dream and purpose
maybe you should use reach to change come true

you have to believe what is your planing
maybe you mean planning, pay attention with your spelling


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