As I stood gazing at the dilapidated house. I shivered, as though, ice had replaced my spine.
As I stood gazing at the dilapidated house, I shivered as though ice had replace my spine. ... I changed punctuation.
I
was stood at the end of the eerie pathway, looking
nervouslytowardsat the house
nervously .After I gained my
confidancedconfidencewhich looked like sombody used to sleep here.
which looked as if somebody used to sleep there.when I finally movermoved it I saw lots of steps going down,