He live alone in a condominium
he felt lonely and depress at times.
he depressed and felt lonely...
he won't felt lonely any more
he would not..
he walk out the shop.
he got out of...
Jaw is pretty playful and always play with the ball that Stanley bought.
Jaw was... and always played... Stanley had bought
Stanley love to be with Jaw together
At that time, Jaw grew a lot bigger that it was when Stanley bought him.
At that time, Jaw had grown a lot bigger than the first day Stanley bought him.
Stanley cuddle the baby
he keep barking and barking all night and causes Bobo to cry.
he kept barking all night, which caused BoBo to cry
He went to the newspaper office to advertised Jaw and hoped to sell Jaw as soon as possible.
He advertised Jaw on the newspaper to sell for getting rid of Jaw as soon as possible.
Please correct my grammer or my tenses. :)
grammar... Well, it seems that you do need to pay attention to tense. The tenses need to be more unique.
One quick question: can I use 'he' to indicate my animal-Jaw??
Yes, of course.
Thank you for reading my correction. I hope that it will be helpful.
he isn't satisfied about the dog he found there
he was not...